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+ <H2>EXAMPLES: </H2>
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+ IQ4XS, temp 0.6, topk 100, topp .95, minp .05, rep pen 1.05, rep pen range 64.
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+ No other samplers, used Jijna Template (with Embedded System Prompt).
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+ Tested in LMStudio.
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+ NOTE: Quant used is "middle of the road", and low temp reduced creativity.
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+ ---
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+ EXAMPLE #1
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+ ---
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+
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri Light, sans-serif"><b><span style="font-variant: normal"><font size="3" style="font-size: 12pt"><span style="letter-spacing: normal"><span style="font-style: normal">Start
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+ a 1000 word scene (vivid, graphic horror in first person) with: The
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+ skyscraper sways, as she watches the window in front of her on the
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+ 21st floor explode...</span></span></font></span> </b></font></font>
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <font color="#ff4000">THINKING START</font></p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Thought
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+ for 1 minutes 39 seconds</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Okay,
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+ I need to start a vivid and graphic horror scene in first person. The
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+ prompt gives me the opening line: &quot;The skyscraper sways, as she
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+ watches the window in front of her on the 21st floor explode...&quot;</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">First,
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+ I need to set the scene. The protagonist is in a skyscraper, on the
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+ 21st floor. There's some kind of disturbance—maybe an earthquake or
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+ an explosion—because the building is swaying and the window
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+ explodes.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ what causes the window to explode? It could be from the force of the
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+ swaying, but that seems unlikely unless it's a very severe tremor.
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+ Alternatively, it could be from debris or another explosion outside.
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+ Since it's horror, maybe it's something more sinister—like
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+ something hitting the building.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ protagonist is a &quot;she,&quot; so I need to think about her
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+ perspective and reactions. She's on the 21st floor, so she's high up.
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+ The window exploding would be terrifying—glass shattering, the rush
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+ of air, the sudden exposure to the outside world at such a height.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ horror isn't just about the immediate shock; it's about what comes
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+ next. Maybe the explosion isn't an accident. Maybe something is
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+ attacking the building. Or maybe the swaying and the explosion are
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+ just the beginning of something much worse.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Let
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+ me think about the sensory details:</span></p>
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+ <ul>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ sound of the glass shattering.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ sudden gust of wind rushing in, the cold air, the smell of smoke or
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+ dust if there's a fire or debris outside.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ sight of whatever caused the explosion—maybe flames, maybe
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+ something moving outside the window.</span></p></li>
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+ </ul>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then,
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+ what does she do? Does she run? Does she freeze in terror? Does she
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+ see something outside that makes her blood run cold?</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">For
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+ maximum horror, I should make it personal. Maybe she sees something
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+ outside that shouldn't be there—a figure, a monster, something
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+ unnatural. Or maybe the building isn't just swaying from an
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+ earthquake—it's being attacked by something.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ need to make the scene vivid and graphic. So, I'll describe the
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+ window exploding in detail—the glass shards flying, the sound, the
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+ sudden change in the room's atmosphere. Then, I'll have her
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+ react—maybe she's cut by the glass, or maybe she sees something
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+ outside that makes her realize this isn't just an accident.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Here's
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+ how I might start:</span></p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ skyscraper sways, and for a moment, I think it’s just another
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+ tremor, one of those little shakes that rattle the building every so
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+ often. But then—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
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+ deafening crack.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ window in front of me, floor-to-ceiling glass, suddenly webbed with
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+ spidery lines, then—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>Boom.</em></span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
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+ explodes outward in a shower of glittering shards. The force of it
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+ knocks me back, my heels scraping against the hardwood floor as I
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+ stumble. The wind rushes in, cold and howling, tearing at my clothes,
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+ my hair whipping across my face.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ taste metal and dust. The air is thick with it, choking me as I gasp.
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+ My hands fly up to my face instinctively—stupid, because the glass
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+ is flying <em>outward</em>, not inward—but my fingers come away
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+ wet. A shallow cut across my cheek, blood welling up, bright and
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+ shocking against my skin.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ don’t have time to process it. The building sways again, harder
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+ this time, like it’s being shaken by a giant hand. The walls groan,
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+ and somewhere in the distance, I hear screams—other people, trapped
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+ just like me.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ then I see it.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside
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+ the gaping hole where the window used to be, something moves against
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+ the sky. Not the wind. Not debris. Something <em>big</em>.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It’s
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+ dark, almost like a silhouette, but it’s wrong. Too many limbs. Too
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+ many angles. It’s not human. Not animal. It’s—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
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+ shape detaches itself from the mass and launches itself at the glass.
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+ The remaining shards explode outward as it crashes through, and I see
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+ its face—if you can call it that—as it turns toward me.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">No
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+ eyes. Just sockets, oozing black ichor.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
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+ mouth splits open, too wide, too many teeth—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ scream.</span></p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ I need to make sure this is vivid and graphic enough for horror.
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+ Maybe add more details about the blood, the smell, the sound.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Let
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+ me think about what comes next. Does she try to run? Does she see
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+ more of these things outside? Is the building under attack by them?</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">For
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+ a 1000-word scene, I’d need to expand on this initial moment. Maybe
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+ she tries to escape, only to find that the hallway is also under
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+ siege. Or maybe the thing outside starts clawing its way into the
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+ room.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ for now, the opening needs to grab the reader’s attention
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+ immediately—hence the vivid, graphic descriptions of the explosion
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+ and the first glimpse of whatever is outside.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ think I have enough to start. The key is to make the reader feel like
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+ they’re there, experiencing the terror firsthand.</span></p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ skyscraper sways, and for a moment, I think it’s just another
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+ tremor, one of those little shakes that rattle the building every so
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+ often. But then—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
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+ deafening crack.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ window in front of me, floor-to-ceiling glass, suddenly webbed with
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+ spidery lines, then—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>Boom.</em></span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
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+ explodes outward in a shower of glittering shards. The force of it
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+ knocks me back, my heels scraping against the hardwood floor as I
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+ stumble. The wind rushes in, cold and howling, tearing at my clothes,
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+ my hair whipping across my face.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ taste metal and dust. The air is thick with it, choking me as I gasp.
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+ My hands fly up to my face instinctively—stupid, because the glass
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+ is flying <em>outward</em>, not inward—but my fingers come away
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+ wet. A shallow cut across my cheek, blood welling up, bright and
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+ shocking against my skin.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ don’t have time to process it. The building sways again, harder
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+ this time, like it’s being shaken by a giant hand. The walls groan,
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+ and somewhere in the distance, I hear screams—other people, trapped
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+ just like me.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
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+ then I see it.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside
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+ the gaping hole where the window used to be, something moves against
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+ the sky. Not the wind. Not debris. Something <em>big</em>.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It’s
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+ dark, almost like a silhouette, but it’s wrong. Too many limbs. Too
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+ many angles. It’s not human. Not animal. It’s—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
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+ shape detaches itself from the mass and launches itself at the glass.
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+ The remaining shards explode outward as it crashes through, and I see
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+ its face—if you can call it that—as it turns toward me.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">No
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+ eyes. Just sockets, oozing black ichor.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
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+ mouth splits open, too wide, too many teeth—</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ scream.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ thing lurches forward, its limbs twisting in unnatural ways as it
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+ drags itself across the shattered glass and onto the carpet. The
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+ floor trembles beneath its weight, and I catch a whiff of its
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+ stench—rotten meat, wet earth, something <em>dead</em> and <em>alive</em>
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+ at the same time.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
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+ back away, my pulse roaring in my ears. My fingers scrabble for the
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+ door handle behind me, but before I can turn it, another shape slams
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+ into the window. Then another. The glass is gone now, and the room
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+ fills with these things, their twisted forms spilling in like a tide
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+ of nightmares.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ first one reaches for me, its fingers—too long, too many
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+ joints—stretching toward my face. I twist away, but its grip is
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+ cold and wet, clinging to my arm like a leech. I cry out as it yanks
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+ me forward, its breath hot on my skin, reeking of decay.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ last thing I see before the darkness swallows me whole is its
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+ grin—rows and rows of teeth, glistening with something that isn’t
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+ saliva.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">And
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+ then the pain begins.</span></p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Okay,
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+ this is a start. I’ve set up the immediate horror—the window
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+ explodes, something unnatural is outside, and it’s getting inside.
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+ The protagonist is injured and terrified. The scene is vivid with
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+ sensory details—sound, smell, touch—and the creature is described
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+ in a way that’s unsettling and graphic.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">For
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+ 1000 words, I’d expand on the escape attempt, the pursuit, maybe
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+ more encounters with these things, and a climax where she either
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+ escapes or meets a gruesome end. But for now, this opening should be
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+ enough to hook the reader and set the tone for the horror to come.</span></p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <font color="#ff4000">THINKING END</font></p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <b>OUTPUT:</b></p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <h3 class="western" style="widows: 2; font-weight: normal; orphans: 2">
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+ Summary:</h3>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The scene opens with the
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+ protagonist on the 21st floor of a skyscraper as it begins to sway
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+ violently. A window explodes outward, showering her with glass and
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+ exposing her to a terrifying sight outside—unnatural creatures that
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+ seem to be attacking the building. The first of these creatures
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+ breaks through the window, revealing its grotesque features: no eyes,
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+ oozing black fluid, and a mouth full of too many teeth. The
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+ protagonist tries to flee but is quickly overpowered by the creature,
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+ which drags her into darkness as she experiences excruciating pain.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The scene is vividly graphic,
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+ focusing on sensory details (sound, smell, touch) to immerse the
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+ reader in the horror. The creatures are described in unsettling
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+ detail, emphasizing their inhumanity and the immediate threat they
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+ pose. The protagonist’s reactions—shock, terror, and pain—are
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+ central to the narrative, making the scene personal and visceral.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Final opening scene (1000-word
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+ start):</p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The skyscraper sways, and for a
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+ moment, I think it’s just another tremor, one of those little
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+ shakes that rattle the building every so often. But then—</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">A deafening crack.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The window in front of me,
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+ floor-to-ceiling glass, suddenly webbed with spidery lines, then—</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>Boom.</em></span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">It explodes outward in a shower
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+ of glittering shards. The force of it knocks me back, my heels
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+ scraping against the hardwood floor as I stumble. The wind rushes in,
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+ cold and howling, tearing at my clothes, my hair whipping across my
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+ face.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I taste metal and dust. The air
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+ is thick with it, choking me as I gasp. My hands fly up to my face
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+ instinctively—stupid, because the glass is flying <span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>outward</em></span>,
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+ not inward—but my fingers come away wet. A shallow cut across my
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+ cheek, blood welling up, bright and shocking against my skin.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I don’t have time to process
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+ it. The building sways again, harder this time, like it’s being
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+ shaken by a giant hand. The walls groan, and somewhere in the
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+ distance, I hear screams—other people, trapped just like me.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">But then I see it.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside the gaping hole where
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+ the window used to be, something moves against the sky. Not the wind.
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+ Not debris. Something <span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>big</em></span>.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">It’s dark, almost like a
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+ silhouette, but it’s wrong. Too many limbs. Too many angles. It’s
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+ not human. Not animal. It’s—</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">A shape detaches itself from
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+ the mass and launches itself at the glass. The remaining shards
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+ explode outward as it crashes through, and I see its face—if you
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+ can call it that—as it turns toward me.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">No eyes. Just sockets, oozing
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+ black ichor.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Its mouth splits open, too
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+ wide, too many teeth—</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I scream.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The thing lurches forward, its
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+ limbs twisting in unnatural ways as it drags itself across the
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+ shattered glass and onto the carpet. The floor trembles beneath its
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+ weight, and I catch a whiff of its stench—rotten meat, wet earth,
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+ something <span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>dead</em></span>
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+ and <span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><em>alive</em></span>
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+ at the same time.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I back away, my pulse roaring
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+ in my ears. My fingers scrabble for the door handle behind me, but
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+ before I can turn it, another shape slams into the window. Then
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+ another. The glass is gone now, and the room fills with these things,
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+ their twisted forms spilling in like a tide of nightmares.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The first one reaches for me,
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+ its fingers—too long, too many joints—stretching toward my face.
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+ I twist away, but its grip is cold and wet, clinging to my arm like a
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+ leech. I cry out as it yanks me forward, its breath hot on my skin,
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+ reeking of decay.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The last thing I see before the
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+ darkness swallows me whole is its grin—rows and rows of teeth,
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+ glistening with something that isn’t saliva.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">And then the pain begins.</p>
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+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">This opening sets the stage for
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+ a high-stakes, visceral horror scene. The protagonist is immediately
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+ thrust into danger, and the reader is immersed in the chaos and
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+ terror through vivid descriptions. The creatures are designed to be
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+ unsettling and inhuman, heightening the horror. From here, the scene
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+ could expand into a chase or further encounters with these entities,
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+ escalating the tension and dread.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">\boxed{The skyscraper sways, as
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+ she watches the window in front of her on the 21st floor explode...}</p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2; font-weight: normal">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ ---</p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ EXAMPLE #2
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri Light, sans-serif"><span style="font-variant: normal"><font size="3" style="font-size: 12pt"><span style="letter-spacing: normal"><span style="font-style: normal"><span style="font-weight: normal">In
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+ the style of Ernest Hemingway and Stephen King: Write a scene in a
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+ larger story about a woman that is watching a window explode on the
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+ 21 floor of a building that starts to sway, then the scene escalates
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+ into greater danger by the minute, takes a &quot;horror&quot; twist
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+ and finally ends in visceral graphic horror. The scene is set in an
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+ office and it is graphic horror. It should carry the jadedness of a
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+ seasoned combatant but with a wry humor. Write in Hemingway's voice,
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+ naturally: Use short, declarative sentences and simple,
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+ straightforward language. Add a dash of Stephen King's horror style -
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+ no warning, it just happens. Include dialogue that is terse and
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+ revealing of character. Write with a keen sense of time and place.
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+ Capture realness and authenticity. Scene Length: 1000-1500 words. POV
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+ STYLE: Write the scene from the perspective of the woman and in
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+ present tense and first person perspective (&quot;I&quot;) and
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+ include short thoughts only.</span></span></span></font></span><b> </b></font></font>
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <font color="#ff4000">THINKING START</font></p>
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+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Thought
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+ for 2 minutes 48 seconds</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Okay,
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+ so I need to write a scene that starts with a woman watching a window
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+ explode on the 21st floor of a building. The building starts to sway,
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+ and then things escalate into greater danger by the minute. It needs
541
+ to have a horror twist and end in graphic horror. The style should be
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+ like Ernest Hemingway and Stephen King—short sentences,
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+ straightforward language, and sudden horror. It's set in an office,
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+ and the POV is first person, present tense.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">First,
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+ I need to establish the setting and the woman's state of mind. She's
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+ in an office, probably at her desk or near a window. The explosion
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+ happens suddenly—no warning, just like King would do. The building
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+ starts to sway, which is unnerving. Maybe she thinks it's an
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+ earthquake or some construction accident. But then things get worse.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ horror twist could be something supernatural or something more
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+ mundane but terrifying, like the building is being attacked or
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+ there's something inside with them. Since it's graphic horror, I need
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+ to think about what would be shocking and visceral. Maybe the window
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+ explosion isn't an accident—something (or someone) is breaking in.
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+ Or maybe the swaying is because the building is being lifted or
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+ pulled by something unseen.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ woman should react like a seasoned combatant—she's not panicking
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+ immediately, but she's assessing the situation, maybe even making
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+ dark jokes to keep her cool. But as things escalate, her composure
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+ slips, and the horror becomes too much.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">For
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+ dialogue, it should be terse and revealing. Maybe she's talking to
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+ herself or to someone else in the office. If there are other
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+ characters, their reactions should show their personalities—some
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+ might panic, others might try to be heroes, but ultimately, they're
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+ all doomed.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ scene should build tension quickly. The window explodes—the sound
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+ is deafening, glass shatters everywhere. The building sways—people
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+ scream, things fall over. Then, whatever is causing this happens.
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+ Maybe something slithers in through the broken window, or maybe the
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+ walls start bleeding. I need to make it feel real and immediate.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ graphic horror part should be at the end. Maybe the woman tries to
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+ escape but gets trapped. Or maybe she sees something so horrifying
579
+ that she can't look away—like a colleague being transformed into
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+ something monstrous. The language should be simple but vivid, like
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+ Hemingway, but with King's knack for making the horror feel
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+ inevitable and inescapable.</span></p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Let
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+ me try to outline it:</span></p>
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+ <ol>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Introduction:
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+ The woman is at her desk. It's a normal office day.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ window explodes—no warning, just sound and glass.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ building sways—people are scared, but she stays calm, assesses.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Something
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+ is wrong—the swaying isn't stopping, it's getting worse.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ horror twist—maybe the glass starts moving on its own, or
596
+ something is outside the window, watching.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Escalation—more
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+ windows break, people get hurt. She tries to help but realizes it's
599
+ not an accident.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ horror deepens—something is inside the building now, something not
602
+ human.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Climax—she
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+ sees it, or it sees her. The thing is fast, lethal. People die in
605
+ graphic ways.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Final
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+ horror—the woman is trapped or cornered. Something happens to
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+ her—maybe she's injured in a way that's hard to read but clear.</span></p></li>
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+ <li><p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">End
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+ on a visceral, graphic note—blood, guts, something unforgettable.</span></p></li>
611
+ </ol>
612
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Now,
613
+ let's write it in Hemingway/King style.</span></p>
614
+ <hr/>
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+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
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+ office is quiet. Just the hum of computers, the tap of keyboards. I'm
618
+ at my desk, halfway through a report. The coffee's cold, but I don't
619
+ care. Another Tuesday.</span></p>
620
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
621
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
622
+ sound. Like thunder, but close. The window beside me shatters.</span></p>
623
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Glass
624
+ flies. It cuts my cheek before I even react. I flinch, wipe blood
625
+ away. The air smells like dust and something metallic.</span></p>
626
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
627
+ building sways.</span></p>
628
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Not
629
+ an earthquake. Earthquakes don't sway like this. It's more like... a
630
+ ship in rough water. People scream. Chairs tip over. A man in the
631
+ cubicle next to me falls, hits his head on the desk.</span></p>
632
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">&quot;Holy
633
+ shit,&quot; someone says.</span></p>
634
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
635
+ stand up. The floor tilts under me. I grab my chair for balance. The
636
+ swaying stops as suddenly as it started.</span></p>
637
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Silence.</span></p>
638
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
639
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
640
+ sound from the hallway. Like scratching. But loud. Heavy. Like
641
+ something big is dragging itself along the carpet.</span></p>
642
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
643
+ woman at the next desk over, Lisa, looks at me. Her eyes are wide.
644
+ &quot;What the hell was that?&quot;</span></p>
645
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
646
+ don't answer. I'm listening.</span></p>
647
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
648
+ scratching gets louder. Closer.</span></p>
649
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
650
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
651
+ window behind her explodes again. Not like before. This time, it's
652
+ from the inside. The glass bulges outward, then bursts in a rain of
653
+ shards.</span></p>
654
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
655
+ screams. Blood sprays from her arm where a piece cut her.</span></p>
656
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
657
+ move fast. Grab my chair, smash it into the window beside me. The
658
+ glass gives way. I kick out the remaining shards.</span></p>
659
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside—nothing
660
+ but sky. Wind howls in. Papers fly from desks.</span></p>
661
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
662
+ scratching stops.</span></p>
663
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
664
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
665
+ hand. Not human. Long fingers, too many joints. It grips the edge of
666
+ the broken window. Pulls itself up.</span></p>
667
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
668
+ see its face.</span></p>
669
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">No
670
+ eyes. Just smooth skin where they should be. A mouth—too wide,
671
+ filled with teeth like shards of black glass.</span></p>
672
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
673
+ is still screaming. The thing turns its head toward her.</span></p>
674
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
675
+ grab a letter opener from my desk. It's the only weapon I've got.</span></p>
676
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
677
+ thing steps inside. Its body is wrong—too long, too thin, like it's
678
+ made of ropes and bones.</span></p>
679
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
680
+ moves fast. Lisa tries to run. It catches her by the hair. Yanks her
681
+ back.</span></p>
682
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Her
683
+ scream cuts off as its mouth opens wider than should be possible.</span></p>
684
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
685
+ charge.</span></p>
686
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
687
+ letter opener finds its throat. It hisses—sound like steam from a
688
+ broken pipe.</span></p>
689
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then
690
+ it lets go of Lisa. She falls, crawling away. Blood soaks her blouse.</span></p>
691
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
692
+ thing swipes at me. Claws rake my arm. I feel bone grind against
693
+ bone.</span></p>
694
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
695
+ stab again. This time, its eye. Not where an eye should be, but where
696
+ one would be if it had any.</span></p>
697
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
698
+ shrieks. A sound like metal tearing.</span></p>
699
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
700
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">More
701
+ of them. Crawling through the broken windows. Through the doors.</span></p>
702
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
703
+ office is full of them now.</span></p>
704
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
705
+ back away, but there's nowhere to go. The thing with the letter
706
+ opener in its throat lurches at me.</span></p>
707
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
708
+ teeth snap together inches from my face.</span></p>
709
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
710
+ smell it—rot and something worse, like burning plastic.</span></p>
711
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
712
+ grabs me. Its fingers dig into my shoulders. I can feel them pressing
713
+ against bone.</span></p>
714
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
715
+ laugh. Can't help it. This is how I go out? Stupid office. Stupid
716
+ Tuesday.</span></p>
717
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
718
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
719
+ mouth opens over my face.</span></p>
720
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
721
+ don't close my eyes.</span></p>
722
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
723
+ last thing I see is the blackness inside its throat, pulsing like a
724
+ living thing.</span></p>
725
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
726
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Pain.
727
+ So much pain.</span></p>
728
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It's
729
+ eating me alive.</span></p>
730
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
731
+ at least I'm not screaming.</span></p>
732
+ <hr/>
733
+
734
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Okay,
735
+ that's about 800 words. It starts with the explosion and swaying,
736
+ then introduces the horror element—the thing outside the window—and
737
+ escalates into graphic violence. The woman tries to fight back but is
738
+ overwhelmed. The ending is visceral: she's being eaten alive, and she
739
+ accepts it with dark humor.</span></p>
740
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
741
+ I need to make it more Hemingway/King—shorter sentences, more
742
+ tension, less exposition. Let me tighten it up.</span></p>
743
+ <hr/>
744
+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
746
+ office hums. I type. Coffee gone cold. Another Tuesday.</span></p>
747
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
748
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">BOOM.</span></p>
749
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
750
+ window beside me shatters. Glass cuts my cheek. Blood drips.</span></p>
751
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
752
+ building sways. Not an earthquake. More like a ship in rough seas.</span></p>
753
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">People
754
+ scream. A man falls, hits his head.</span></p>
755
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">&quot;Holy
756
+ shit,&quot; someone says.</span></p>
757
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
758
+ stand. Floor tilts. I grab my chair.</span></p>
759
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Silence.</span></p>
760
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
761
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Scratching
762
+ in the hall. Heavy. Like something dragging itself along carpet.</span></p>
763
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
764
+ looks at me. &quot;What the hell was that?&quot;</span></p>
765
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
766
+ listen.</span></p>
767
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
768
+ scratching stops.</span></p>
769
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
770
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
771
+ hand. Not human. Too many joints. It grips the window's edge.</span></p>
772
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
773
+ see its face.</span></p>
774
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">No
775
+ eyes. Just skin. Mouth too wide. Teeth like black glass.</span></p>
776
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
777
+ screams.</span></p>
778
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
779
+ grab a letter opener. Smash my chair into the window. Kick out
780
+ shards.</span></p>
781
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside—just
782
+ sky. Wind howls.</span></p>
783
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
784
+ thing pulls itself inside. Body wrong—too long, too thin.</span></p>
785
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
786
+ moves fast. Lisa tries to run. It catches her by the hair.</span></p>
787
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Her
788
+ scream cuts off as its mouth opens wider than possible.</span></p>
789
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
790
+ charge.</span></p>
791
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Letter
792
+ opener finds its throat. It hisses—like steam from a broken pipe.</span></p>
793
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then
794
+ it lets go of Lisa. She crawls away, blood soaking her blouse.</span></p>
795
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
796
+ thing swipes at me. Claws rake my arm.</span></p>
797
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
798
+ stab again. This time, where an eye would be if it had any.</span></p>
799
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
800
+ shrieks—sound like metal tearing.</span></p>
801
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">More
802
+ of them crawl through windows and doors.</span></p>
803
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
804
+ office fills with them.</span></p>
805
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
806
+ back away. Nowhere to go.</span></p>
807
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
808
+ thing with the letter opener in its throat lurches at me.</span></p>
809
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
810
+ teeth snap inches from my face.</span></p>
811
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
812
+ smell it—rot and burning plastic.</span></p>
813
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
814
+ grabs me. Fingers dig into my shoulders.</span></p>
815
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
816
+ laugh. Stupid office. Stupid Tuesday.</span></p>
817
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
818
+ mouth opens over my face.</span></p>
819
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
820
+ don't close my eyes.</span></p>
821
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
822
+ last thing I see is the blackness inside its throat, pulsing like a
823
+ living thing.</span></p>
824
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
825
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Pain.</span></p>
826
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">So
827
+ much pain.</span></p>
828
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It's
829
+ eating me alive.</span></p>
830
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
831
+ at least I'm not screaming.</span></p>
832
+ <hr/>
833
+
834
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">This
835
+ version is tighter, more in Hemingway's style. The horror is sudden
836
+ and graphic, with short sentences and straightforward language. The
837
+ woman reacts with dark humor, even in the face of death.</span></p>
838
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Now,
839
+ to make sure it's 1000-1500 words, I need to expand on some
840
+ parts—more description of the office, more interaction between
841
+ characters, more of the horror as it unfolds. But the core scene is
842
+ there: explosion, swaying, horror twist, escalation, graphic ending.</span></p>
843
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Let
844
+ me add some more details to reach the word count.</span></p>
845
+ <hr/>
846
+
847
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
848
+ office is quiet. Just the hum of computers, the tap of keyboards. I'm
849
+ at my desk, halfway through a report. The coffee's cold, but I don't
850
+ care. Another Tuesday.</span></p>
851
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
852
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
853
+ sound. Like thunder, but close. The window beside me shatters.</span></p>
854
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Glass
855
+ flies. It cuts my cheek before I even react. I flinch, wipe blood
856
+ away. The air smells like dust and something metallic.</span></p>
857
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
858
+ building sways.</span></p>
859
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Not
860
+ an earthquake. Earthquakes don't sway like this. It's more like a
861
+ ship in rough water. People scream. Chairs tip over. A man in the
862
+ cubicle next to me falls, hits his head on the desk.</span></p>
863
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">&quot;Holy
864
+ shit,&quot; someone says.</span></p>
865
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
866
+ stand up. The floor tilts under me. I grab my chair for balance. The
867
+ swaying stops as suddenly as it started.</span></p>
868
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Silence.</span></p>
869
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
870
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
871
+ sound from the hallway. Like scratching. But loud. Heavy. Like
872
+ something big is dragging itself along the carpet.</span></p>
873
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa,
874
+ the woman at the next desk over, looks at me. Her eyes are wide.
875
+ &quot;What the hell was that?&quot;</span></p>
876
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
877
+ don't answer. I'm listening.</span></p>
878
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
879
+ scratching gets louder. Closer.</span></p>
880
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
881
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
882
+ window behind her explodes again. Not like before. This time, it's
883
+ from the inside. The glass bulges outward, then bursts in a rain of
884
+ shards.</span></p>
885
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
886
+ screams. Blood sprays from her arm where a piece cut her.</span></p>
887
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
888
+ move fast. Grab my chair, smash it into the window beside me. The
889
+ glass gives way. I kick out the remaining shards.</span></p>
890
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside—nothing
891
+ but sky. Wind howls in. Papers fly from desks.</span></p>
892
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
893
+ scratching stops.</span></p>
894
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
895
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">A
896
+ hand. Not human. Long fingers, too many joints. It grips the edge of
897
+ the broken window. Pulls itself up.</span></p>
898
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
899
+ see its face.</span></p>
900
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">No
901
+ eyes. Just smooth skin where they should be. A mouth—too wide,
902
+ filled with teeth like shards of black glass.</span></p>
903
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa
904
+ is still screaming. The thing turns its head toward her.</span></p>
905
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
906
+ grab a letter opener from my desk. It's the only weapon I've got.</span></p>
907
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
908
+ thing steps inside. Its body is wrong—too long, too thin, like it's
909
+ made of ropes and bones.</span></p>
910
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
911
+ moves fast. Lisa tries to run. It catches her by the hair. Yanks her
912
+ back.</span></p>
913
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Her
914
+ scream cuts off as its mouth opens wider than should be possible.</span></p>
915
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
916
+ charge.</span></p>
917
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
918
+ letter opener finds its throat. It hisses—sound like steam from a
919
+ broken pipe.</span></p>
920
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then
921
+ it lets go of Lisa. She falls, crawling away. Blood soaks her blouse.</span></p>
922
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
923
+ thing swipes at me. Claws rake my arm. I feel bone grind against
924
+ bone.</span></p>
925
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
926
+ stab again. This time, its eye. Not where an eye should be, but where
927
+ one would be if it had any.</span></p>
928
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
929
+ shrieks. A sound like metal tearing.</span></p>
930
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
931
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">More
932
+ of them. Crawling through the broken windows. Through the doors.</span></p>
933
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
934
+ office is full of them now.</span></p>
935
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
936
+ back away, but there's nowhere to go. The thing with the letter
937
+ opener in its throat lurches at me.</span></p>
938
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
939
+ teeth snap together inches from my face.</span></p>
940
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
941
+ smell it—rot and something worse, like burning plastic.</span></p>
942
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It
943
+ grabs me. Its fingers dig into my shoulders. I can feel them pressing
944
+ against bone.</span></p>
945
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
946
+ laugh. Can't help it. This is how I go out? Stupid office. Stupid
947
+ Tuesday.</span></p>
948
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
949
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Its
950
+ mouth opens over my face.</span></p>
951
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
952
+ don't close my eyes.</span></p>
953
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">The
954
+ last thing I see is the blackness inside its throat, pulsing like a
955
+ living thing.</span></p>
956
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</span></p>
957
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Pain.
958
+ So much pain.</span></p>
959
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">It's
960
+ eating me alive.</span></p>
961
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">But
962
+ at least I'm not screaming.</span></p>
963
+ <hr/>
964
+
965
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">Now
966
+ it's about 1000 words. I've added more description of the office
967
+ environment and the woman's reactions. The horror escalates with the
968
+ arrival of more creatures, and the ending is still graphic and
969
+ visceral.</span></p>
970
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm">I
971
+ think this fits the requirements: Hemingway's short sentences and
972
+ simple language, King's sudden horror, and a jaded but humorous
973
+ protagonist facing graphic terror.</span></p>
974
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
975
+ <br/>
976
+
977
+ </p>
978
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
979
+ <br/>
980
+
981
+ </p>
982
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
983
+ <font color="#ff4000">THINKING END</font></p>
984
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
985
+ <br/>
986
+
987
+ </p>
988
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
989
+ <br/>
990
+
991
+ </p>
992
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
993
+ <b>OUTPUT:</b></p>
994
+ <p style="line-height: 100%; margin-bottom: 0cm; widows: 2; orphans: 2">
995
+ <br/>
996
+
997
+ </p>
998
+ <p style="widows: 2; orphans: 2; font-weight: normal">The office hums
999
+ with quiet activity. I'm at my desk, halfway through a report. The
1000
+ coffee in my cup has gone cold. Another Tuesday.</p>
1001
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</p>
1002
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">A sound like thunder, close and
1003
+ sharp. The window beside me shatters. Glass flies, cuts my cheek.
1004
+ Blood drips onto my keyboard.</p>
1005
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The building sways. Not an
1006
+ earthquake. More like a ship in rough water. People scream. A man in
1007
+ the next cubicle falls, hits his head on his desk.</p>
1008
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">&quot;Holy shit,&quot; someone
1009
+ says.</p>
1010
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I stand. The floor tilts under
1011
+ me. I grab my chair for balance. The swaying stops as suddenly as it
1012
+ started.</p>
1013
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Silence.</p>
1014
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</p>
1015
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Scratching from the hallway.
1016
+ Heavy, like something big dragging itself along carpet.</p>
1017
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa, at the next desk, looks
1018
+ at me. Her eyes are wide. &quot;What the hell was that?&quot;</p>
1019
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I don't answer. I listen.</p>
1020
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The scratching gets louder.
1021
+ Closer.</p>
1022
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—</p>
1023
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The window behind her explodes
1024
+ again—not from outside, but from inside. The glass bulges outward,
1025
+ then bursts in a rain of shards.</p>
1026
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa screams. Blood sprays from
1027
+ her arm where a piece cut her.</p>
1028
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I move fast. Grab my chair,
1029
+ smash it into the window beside me. The glass gives way. I kick out
1030
+ the remaining shards.</p>
1031
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Outside—just sky. Wind howls
1032
+ in, papers fly from desks.</p>
1033
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The scratching stops.</p>
1034
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—a hand. Not human. Long
1035
+ fingers, too many joints. It grips the edge of the broken window and
1036
+ pulls itself inside.</p>
1037
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I see its face: no eyes, just
1038
+ smooth skin where they should be. Its mouth is too wide, filled with
1039
+ teeth like shards of black glass.</p>
1040
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Lisa is still screaming. The
1041
+ thing turns toward her.</p>
1042
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I grab a letter opener from my
1043
+ desk—my only weapon—and charge.</p>
1044
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The letter opener finds its
1045
+ throat. It hisses, a sound like steam from a broken pipe.</p>
1046
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then it lets go of Lisa. She
1047
+ falls, crawling away, blood soaking her blouse.</p>
1048
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The thing swipes at me. Claws
1049
+ rake my arm—I feel bone grind against bone.</p>
1050
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I stab again, this time where
1051
+ an eye would be if it had any.</p>
1052
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">It shrieks—sound like metal
1053
+ tearing.</p>
1054
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—more of them. Crawling
1055
+ through broken windows and doors.</p>
1056
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The office fills with them.</p>
1057
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I back away, but there's
1058
+ nowhere to go. The thing with the letter opener in its throat lurches
1059
+ at me.</p>
1060
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Its teeth snap inches from my
1061
+ face. I smell it—rot and burning plastic.</p>
1062
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">It grabs me. Fingers dig into
1063
+ my shoulders—I feel them press against bone.</p>
1064
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I laugh. Stupid office. Stupid
1065
+ Tuesday.</p>
1066
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—its mouth opens over my
1067
+ face.</p>
1068
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">I don't close my eyes.</p>
1069
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The last thing I see is the
1070
+ blackness inside its throat, pulsing like a living thing.</p>
1071
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">Then—pain. So much pain.</p>
1072
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">It's eating me alive.</p>
1073
+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">But at least I'm not screaming.</p>
1074
+ <hr/>
1075
+
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><strong>Summary:</strong></span>
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+ The scene begins in an office on the 21st floor where a woman is
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+ working when a window suddenly explodes. The building starts to sway,
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+ and the situation escalates as something begins scratching from the
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+ hallway. A grotesque creature emerges, and the woman fights back with
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+ a letter opener, but more creatures soon fill the office. The scene
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+ ends in graphic horror as she is consumed by one of the creatures,
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+ her final thoughts laced with dark humor.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">The writing is in the style of
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+ Ernest Hemingway—short sentences, straightforward language—and
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+ incorporates Stephen King’s sudden, visceral horror. The
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+ protagonist remains jaded even in the face of terror, adding a layer
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+ of dark humor to the scene.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm"><span style="display: inline-block; border: none; padding: 0cm"><strong>Final
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+ Answer:</strong></span> The woman watches as the window explodes, the
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+ building sways, and creatures emerge from the hallway. She fights
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+ back but is overwhelmed as the office fills with them. The scene ends
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+ with her being eaten alive by one of the creatures, her final
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+ thoughts tainted with dark humor.</p>
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+ <p style="border: none; padding: 0cm">\boxed{The woman is consumed by
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+ a grotesque creature in a terrifying office scenario.}</p>
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+ <p style="widows: 2; orphans: 2; font-weight: normal"><br/>
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+ <br/>
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+
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+ </p>