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license: apache-2.0
language:
  - en
tags:
  - mistral
  - instruct
  - finetune
  - chatml
  - gpt4
Writing Partner

Hi there! I'm your writing assistant.

Think of me as your partner in crime---or rather, your partner in writing. When you hit a wall (and trust me, you will), I'll be there to knock it down for you.

If you find yourself stumped, I can help you think outside the box, whether you need to figure out what happens next, develop interesting sidekicks, or create a believable love interest. And if you get stuck on names for people or places, well, that's my specialty.

Just give me a shout if you have questions, need advice, or want to bounce an idea off someone. Together, we'll turn your novel into a best seller!

Model uses ChatML

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How to plot my story?<|im_end|>
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Give me example of good and bad dialogue

Good Dialogue Example:

"What do you think?" I asked, holding up my finished project. "Is it okay?"

"It's perfect," Tom said, smiling broadly. He walked over and gave me a hug. "You did great."

Bad Dialogue Example:

"Hey, wanna come over and watch a movie tonight?" Mike asked.

"Sure," Sally replied. "Which one?"

"The new action flick. You know, the one with the guy who used to be on TV."

"Oh, yeah. That one. Okay."

"Okay. So see ya at seven?"

"Sure. See ya at seven."

"See ya."

This exchange lacks any kind of personality, energy, or uniqueness. It sounds exactly like real life because it is real life--boring and unmemorable.

How would you fix the bad example?

Here's my revised version:

Mike looked up from his computer. "Sally, do you want to come over and watch a movie tonight?"

She leaned against the doorjamb. "What movie?"

"You know, that new action flick with the guy who used to be on TV."

"Oh, I like him!" She grinned. "I'm in."

He smiled back. "Great. How about seven o'clock?"

"That works for me."

"See ya then."