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301 | gec | However, these 2 problems are enough to cause the downfall and failure of the product when it is placed in the market. | #However, these two problems are sufficient to cause a downfall and a failure in a product when it is placed in a market. | #However, these two problems are sufficient to cause a downfall and a failure in a product when it is placed in a market. | Fix grammatical errors: However, these 2 problems are enough to cause the downfall and failure of the product when placed in the market. |
302 | gec | Therefore, the purchase of materials can be quite costly as plenty of them will go to waste. | # Therefore, the purchase of materials will be quite expensive as lots of them are going to go waste. | # Therefore, the purchase of materials will be quite expensive as many will go into waste. | Fix grammar in the sentence: Therefore, purchasing of materials can be quite costly as plenty of them will go to waste. |
303 | gec | As a result, the lack of funds will hamper the progress of the design process because there will be no material to manufacture a physical product to test its usefulness. | The lack of funding will hinder the process of design as there will not be enough materials to manufacture physical products to test their usefulness. | The lack of funding will hinder the process of design and development of the physical product as there will be no materials to manufacture physical products to test their usefulness. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: As a result, the lack of fund will hamper the progress of the design process as there is no material to manufacture a physical product to test its usefulness. |
304 | gec | Without the knowledge of the characteristics of different materials, one will not be able to choose the best material, which must be strong yet light in weight, to be used. | The knowledge of different characteristics of materials will not only help one to choose a good material, but also must be used to be used. | The knowledge of different characteristics of materials will not only help one to choose a good material, but it will also help to be used in a way that is not only strong, but also light in the weight. | Improve the grammaticality: Without the knowledge of the characteristics of different materials, one will not be able to choose the best material, which must be strong yet light in weight, to be use. |
305 | gec | However, the engineering faculty has since built up race car knowledge after taking part in several annual competitions, and in the recent competition, it came in 19th place. | #However, the engineers have built up their racing knowledge after having taken part in numerous annual competitions and in recent competitions, they have come in third place. | The engineering faculty in the engineering race car has built-up the racing knowledge after participating in several yearly competitions, such as the 1st place, 2nd place, and 3rd place. In the recent race, it was 18th place, which was the first place in the race. | Fix the grammar mistakes: However, the engineering faculty has built up the race car knowledge after taking part in several annual competitions, and in the recent competition it came in 19th place. |
306 | gec | In the case of lacking funds, companies need to find sponsorships to fund the cost of their design processes. | The lack of funds for the design process can lead to companies need sponsorships in order to fund their cost of design processes. | The lack of funds for the design process can lead to companies need sponsorships in order to fund their cost of design processes. | Fix grammar in the sentence: In the case of lacking of funds, companies need to find sponsorships to fund the cost of their design process. |
307 | gec | To illustrate this simply, one current need of modern people is the demand for a consistent energy source. | # To illustrate, one of the current needs of the modern people, is the need for a constant energy source | The current demand for modern people's energy needs is the consistent energy supply. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: To illustrate it simply, one current need of modern people is the demand for a consistent energy source. |
308 | gec | After identifying the problem and listing all the possible solutions, it will figure out the best energy source and try to utilize it to supply energy. | The problem and the list of possible resolutions are identified, and it will try to use it as a source of energy. | The problem and the list of possible resolutions are identified and all possible solutions are listed. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: By identifying the problem and listing all the possible resolutions, it will figure out the best energy source and try to utilize it to supply energy. |
309 | gec | Hence, the demand for an effective energy supply is a major need of modern people. | # Hence, the demand for energy supply will be the major needs of modern-day people. | # Hence, the demand for energy supply will be the major needs of modern-day people. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: Hence, demand for effective energy supply is the major need of modern people. |
310 | gec | Nowadays, the main energy source is a fossil fuel which has a limited storage supply on earth. | The main energy sources nowadays are fossil fuels, which have limited storage capacity in the Earth. | The main energy sources nowadays are fossil fuels, which have limited storage capacity in the Earth. | Fix grammar in the sentence: The main energy source nowadays is fossil fuel energy which has limited storage in the earth. |
311 | gec | Through heat transfer from the tube to the water, the bath water is heated. | The heat transfer process from the tube to water is through the heat transfer medium, the bath water, and the water. | The heat transfer process from the tube to water is through the heat transfer medium, the bath water, and the water. | Improve the grammaticality: Through heat transfer from tube to the water, bath water is heated. |
312 | gec | The production cost of solar energy is higher than that of fossil fuel energy, which therefore impedes its popularity. | In terms of production cost, solar energy has a higher price than that for fossil fuels. Therefore, it is difficult to popularize solar energy. | This production cost is higher compared to that of the production of fossil fuels, which, therefore, impedes the popularization of this energy source. | Make the sentence grammatical: The production cost of solar energy is higher than that of fossil fuel energy, which therefore impedes its popularization. |
313 | gec | In sum, the demand for energy supply is a current need that is closely relevant to people's lives, as it is the basis for maintaining a high living standard. | The demand for electricity supply is currently a current necessity that is strongly relevant to the lives of people. As it is a base for maintaining a high standard of living. | # In sum: In addition to the current need for energy, as a result of the high-living standard, people are also closely related to the energy supply. | Improve the grammaticality: In sum, the demand for energy supply is a current need that is closely relevant to people's lives, as it is the basis for maintaining the high living standard. |
314 | gec | Yet we still have to work on reducing its production cost. | # Yet, we still need to endeavor to reduce the production cost of this product. | # Yet, we still need to endeavor to reduce the production cost of this product. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Yet we still have to endeavor on reducing its production cost. |
315 | gec | An example of this is the electrosurgical device. | The example of this device is an electrosurgery device. | The example of this device is an electrosurgery device. | Improve the grammaticality: Example of this is the electrosurgical device. |
316 | gec | It is very interesting to see how engineering ideas can come about. | # It is a very interesting idea to see how engineering designs can be brought about. | # It is a very interesting idea to see how engineering designs can be brought about. | Fix grammaticality: It is very interesting to see that how engineering ideas can come about. |
317 | gec | Then how does the refrigerator come into being? | The refrigerator came into being because of how it came to be. | The refrigerator came into being because of how it came to be. | Fix errors in this text: Then how does refrigerator come into being? |
318 | gec | Some factors, such as the demand of lead users, economic factors, and environmental concerns, actually play important roles in shaping the refrigerator into its shape today. | # Some factors that actually play an important role in shaping the refrigerator today are the demand for lead users and economic factors. | The factors that actually play an important role in shaping the refrigerator into the shape today are the demand for lead users, the economic factor, and the environmental concern. | Fix errors in this text: Some factors such as the demand of lead user, economic factors, and environmental concern actually play important roles in shaping refrigerator into its shape today. |
319 | gec | Due to the number of words being limited, this essay only scratches the surface of what led to the invention and diffusion of the refrigerator and picks out the three most obvious factors to discuss. | The invention and the diffusion of a refrigerator are due to three main factors: | The invention and the diffusion of a refrigerator are due to three main factors: | Fix grammar in the sentence: Due to the number of words limited, this essay only scratches the surface of what leads to the invention and diffusion of the refrigerator, and picks out the three most obvious factors to discuss. |
320 | gec | Scientists have estimated that given the current global energy consumption, we will only have sufficient oil reserves to last us for another 50 years. | This statement is an estimate of the amount of oil reserves that we have left to last for another half a century. | This statement is based on the fact that given our current energy consumption and the limited reserves of oil, we will only have enough oil reserves for another half a century. | Fix the grammar mistakes: Scientists have estimated that given the current global energy consumption, we only have sufficient oil reserves to last us for another 50 years. |
321 | gec | This would lead to price inflation and could cause an economic slowdown as affordability would become a concern. | # This would cause price inflation, and could lead to an economic downturn as affordability is a concern | The result would be price inflation, and could lead to an economic downturn as the affordability concerns would be concern. | Fix grammaticality: This would lead to price inflation and could cause an economic slowdown as affordability would be a concern. |
322 | gec | Therefore, governments are pouring funds into research in this field to benefit from its economic advantages. | The government is pouring money into the research and development of this field, to benefit the economy from the economic advantages it offers. | The government is pouring money into the research and development of this field in order to benefit the economy from the economic advantages it offers. | Fix grammar in this sentence: Therefore, governments are pouring funds into research on this field to benefit from its economic advantages. |
323 | gec | Next, there is a general consensus that global warming has been greatly caused by the rise of greenhouse emissions from the burning of fossil fuels, which could have devastating and irreversible impacts. | This general consensus has been attributed to the rise in greenhouse emissions from burning fossil fuels. | This general consensus has been attributed to the rise in greenhouse emissions from burning fossil fuels. | Fix grammar: Next, there is a general consensus that global warming has been greatly attributed by the rise of greenhouse emission from the burning of fossil fuels, which could have devastating and irreversible impacts. |
324 | gec | The rising temperature also gives rise to an increase in the number of heat stroke cases and could cause a potential health issue. | The rising temperature has also given rise to the increase in heatstroke cases, and could potentially cause a possible health issue, | The rising temperature has also given rise to the increase in heatstroke cases, and could potentially cause a possible health problem. | Grammar improvements: The rising temperature also gave rise to an increase in the number of heat stroke cases and could cause a potential health issue. |
325 | gec | Therefore, the future of our planet lies in our hands, and we must be socially responsible for our future generations. | This future lies in the hands of our future generations. | In the future, our planet will lie in the hands of our future generations. Therefore, we must act socially responsibly for our own future generation | Remove grammatical mistakes: Therefore, the future of our planet lies in our hands and we must be socially responsible for our future generation. |
326 | gec | Interestingly, this significant technology was initially determined by the California and Arizona state governments inadvertently so as to tackle the issue of smog levels in Los Angeles and Phoenix at that period of time. | The significance of this technological advancement was initially decided by the Californian and Arizona states, inadvertently so that as a result of this, the smog levels at that time were reduced to a significant level. | The significance of this technological advancement was initially decided by the Californian and Arizona states, inadvertently so that as a result of this, the smog levels at that time were reduced to a significant level. | Improve the grammaticality: Interestedly, this significant technology was initially determined by the California and Arizona state governments inadvertently so as to tackle the issue of smog levels in Los Angeles and Phoenix at that period of time. |
327 | gec | Furthermore, leaded petrol has been commonly used by consumers in the past. | The leaded gasoline has been used in the cars for a long time, and it is commonly used in cars today. | The leaded gasoline has been used in the cars for a long time, and it is commonly used in cars today. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Furthermore, leaded petrol has been commonly used by the cars consumers in the past. |
328 | gec | For compressed hydrogen storage, many numerical modeling has been done through computational fluid dynamics tools. | # for the compression of hydrogen storage in the computational fluid dynamic tools, many mathematical modeling have been done. | # for the compression of hydrogen storage in the computational fluid dynamic tools, many mathematical modeling have been done. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: For the compressed hydrogen storage, many numerical modeling has been done through computational fluid dynamics tools. |
329 | gec | Besides the exciting news about hydrogen storage technology, we still need to pay attention to its dangers. | The exciting news is that hydrogen is a promising technology for storing energy. However, we need to be more careful about its dangerous side. | The exciting news is that hydrogen is a promising technology for storing energy. However, we need to be more careful about its dangerous side. | Remove grammatical mistakes: Besides the exciting news about hydrogen storage technology, we still need to pay attention to its dangerous. |
330 | gec | Although they had very different outcomes, they were triggered by the same motivation to make a better world. | # Although they have very different outcomes, they are triggered by a similar motivation to improve the world. | # Although they have very different outcomes, they are triggered by a similar motivation to improve the world. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Although they had very different outcome, they were triggered by the same motivation to make a better world. |
331 | gec | The birth of these two types of innovations had very similar causes, such as pressure from the society or government to cater to certain needs. | The birth of these kinds of innovations has very similar cause, such that such as the pressure from society or the government to meet certain needs, | The birth of these three types of innovation had a very similar cause, which was pressure from society or the government. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: Birth of these two types of innovations had very similar causes, such as pressure from the society or government to cater to certain needs. |
332 | gec | In the 1930s, farmers fed their cattle with sweet clover hay, but these cattle were dying from internal bleeding caused by it. | The 1st century AD saw farmers feed their cows with sweet-clover hay, but cattle died of internal bleeding due to it. | This year, farmers have fed their cows with sweet-clover hay, but cattle have died from internal hemorrhaging caused by the hay. | Fix grammar: In the 1930s, farmers fed their cattle with sweet clover hay but cattle were dying from internal bleeding caused by it. |
333 | gec | Electric cars and warfarin, alike need to be marketed and diffused for potential users to adapt. | The electric cars and warsfarin, alike, are needed to adapt to potential users. | The electric cars and the Warfarin, alike, are needed to adapt to potential users and to diffuse for potential adopters. | Grammar improvements: Electric cars and warfarin alike, they need to be marketed and diffused for potential users to adapt. |
334 | gec | However, the fate of dedicated research innovations and serendipitous innovations can differ greatly. | The fate of a dedicated research innovation and a serendipitous innovation can differ dramatically. | The fate of a dedicated research innovation and a serendipitous innovation can differ dramatically. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: However, the fate of dedicated researched innovations and serendipitous innovations can differ greatly. |
335 | gec | Innovations, however profitable, should not be dismissed but sold to a higher platform where they could spark other ideas or satisfy needs that are not foreseen by the parent organization. | The innovations which are profitable, but not necessarily profitable, should be sold to higher platforms where they could spark new ideas, or satisfy the needs that were not anticipated by the parents organization. | The innovations which are profitable, but not necessarily profitable, should be sold to higher platforms where they could spark new ideas, or satisfy the needs that were not anticipated by the parents organization. | Improve the grammar of this text: Innovations however profitable should not be dismissed but sell to a higher platform where it could spark other ideas or satisfy needs that are not foreseen by the parent organization. |
336 | gec | Given the fact that most households in Singapore share a common block, if the solar panels are fixed on the top of the buildings, will there be enough to provide sufficient electricity for the whole block, which may consist of up to eighty household users? | Given the fact, that most of the households in the Singapore share the common block with a common solar panel system, it is likely that there will be enough electricity to supply the entire block of the building. | Given the fact, that most of the households in the Singapore share the common block with a common solar panel system, it is likely that there will be enough electricity to supply the entire block of the building. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Given the fact that most households in Singapore share a common block, if the solar panels are fixed on the top of the buildings, will there be enough to provide sufficient electricity for the whole block, which may consists of up to eighty household users. |
337 | gec | This current situation may seem favorable theoretically for innovations such as the electric car industries to flourish. | The current situation is favorable theoretically, but it may seem unfavorable theoretically for innovation such as electric cars industries to thrive. | The current situation is favorable theoretically, but it may seem unfavorable theoretically for innovation such as electric cars industries to thrive. | Improve the grammar of this text: This current situation may seems favorable theoretically for innovations such as the electric car industries to flourish. |
338 | gec | Besides giving financial aid to R&D departments which helps to initiate the start of the project on electric cars, subsidies and incentives may also be given to citizens who use electric cars, which would increase the demand for more electric cars. | The other aspect that could be given a boost is the financial aid given to R & D departments which help to initiate a start-up of the electric car project. Besides, the subsidies and incentives may also help to encourage citizens who are using electric cars to use them more. | The other aspect that could be given a boost to the electric car industry is financial aid, subsidies, and incentives. Subsidies and incentives can also help to increase demand for electric cars and thus increase the market share of electric cars in the future. | Fix grammatical errors: Besides giving financial aid to R&D departments which helps to initiate the start of the project on electric cars, subsides and incentive may also be given to citizens who use electric cars which would increase the demand for more electric cars. |
339 | gec | This is one of the reasons why marketing strategies such as the use of promotions and advertisements are extremely important in raising awareness and creating a need for new technologies, thus allowing new technology to survive. | The use of marketing strategies, such as advertising and promotions, is extremely, important in raising awareness and encouraging new technologies to survive | The use of marketing strategies, such as promotions, advertisements, and advertisements, is incredibly important in the rise of awareness and the creation of new technologies. | Improve the grammaticality: This is one of the reasons why marketing strategies such as the use of promotions and advertisements is extremely important in rising the awareness and creating a need for new technologies, thus allowing a new technology to survive. |
340 | gec | In the initial stage, the process allows an engineer to identify the needs and, subsequently, define the problems involved. | The initial stage of the process involves the engineer identifying the needs, and then, defining the problems that need to be addressed. | The initial stage of the process involves the engineer identifying the needs, and then, defining the problems that need to be addressed. | Remove grammar mistakes: In the initial stage, the process allows engineer to identify the needs and subsequently, define the problems involved. |
341 | gec | However, there are limitations in the design process in meeting the needs of safety. | The design process may not meet the needs of the safety. | The design process may not meet the needs of the safety. | Update to remove grammar errors: However, there are limitations in the design process in meeting the need of safety. |
342 | gec | Most of the time, an individual cannot think of all of the safety aspects of a design over a few years. | The most important aspect of an individual's safety over a few years is that they cannot think about all the safety aspects of the design over a short period of time. | The most important aspect of an individual's safety over a few years is that they cannot think about all the safety aspects of the design over a short period of time. | Fix errors in this text: Most of the time, an individual cannot think of all of the safety aspect of a design over few years. |
343 | gec | Secondly, generating good solutions for safety issues requires creativity and, often, risking safety in the first place to better understand it. | In this sentence, the writer is expressing his or her creativity and risk-taking in order to find a good solution to the safety issue. | In this sentence, the writer is expressing his or her creativity and risk-taking in order to find a good solution to safety concerns. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Secondly, generating good solutions to safety issues require creativity and, often, risking safety in the first place to better understand it. |
344 | gec | Lastly, determining which safety solution is feasible comes with experience instead of being able to learn it from a book. | The final step is to determine which safety solutions are feasible, instead of having to learn them of the book. | The final step is to determine which safety solutions are feasible, instead of having to learn them of the book. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Lastly, determining which safety solution is feasible comes with experiences instead of being able to learn it of a book. |
345 | gec | It met many challenges once faced by people, and safety was one of the challenges faced. | # It met many challenges, once faced, before people were able to safety was one of these challenges. | # It met many challenges, once faced, before people were able to safety was one of these challenges. | Fix errors in this text: It met the many challenges once faced by people and safety is one of the challenges faced. |
346 | gec | The final step is to test whether the solution can be executed. | The final step in the testing process is to determine if the solution can be executed. | The final step in the testing process is to determine if the solution can be executed. | Fix grammar: The final step is to test whether the solution is executable. |
347 | gec | This test is still under experimentation because of the rigorous reaction condition. | # This test will still be under the experimental stage because of rigorous reaction conditions. | # This test will still be under the experimental stage because of rigorous reaction conditions. | Fix grammar errors in this sentence: This test is still under the experimentation, because of the rigorous reaction condition. |
348 | gec | It has also brought about much convenience and is now considered an asset to most people. | # It has brought about a lot of convenience and it is now considered an asset for many people. | # It has brought about a lot of convenience and has now been considered an asset for most people | Fix errors in this text: It has also brought about much convenience and is now consider an asset to most people. |
349 | gec | It was because, at that time, the technology was not advanced enough for manufacturers to come up with cool and sleek designs like the mobile phones nowadays. | In the meantime, it was because the technology had not yet advanced enough to manufacture cool and stylish designs like mobile phones today. | In the meantime, it was because the technology had not yet advanced enough to manufacture cool and stylish designs like mobile phones today. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: It was because at that time, the technology was not yet advance enough for manufacturers to come up with cool and sleek designs like the mobile phones nowadays. |
350 | gec | Manufacturers of mobile phones found out the disadvantages and hassles of mobile phones in the past. | The manufacturers of mobile phone have found the disadvantages of the cell phones in their past. | In the past, manufacturers of mobile phone had found out that the disadvantages of the cell phones were the hassles and the hampers that the mobile phone has. | Fix grammar: Manufacturers of mobile phones have found out the disadvantages and hassles of the mobile phones in the past. |
351 | gec | Hence, phone manufacturers decided to take a risk by adding a few new features to the mobile phone to see whether it is acceptable in the market. | # Hence, the phone manufacturers decide to take the risk of adding some new features to their mobile phones to see if it is acceptable in market. | # Hence, the phone manufacturers decide to take the risk of adding some new features to their mobile phones to see if it is acceptable in market. | Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, phone manufacturers decided to take a risk by adding a few new features into the mobile phone to see whether is it acceptable in the market. |
352 | gec | Economic factors also play an important role in this technological innovation. | The economic factors also had an important influence on this technological innovativeness. | The economic factors also had an important influence on this technological innovativeness. | Grammar improvements: Economic factors also played an important role in this technological innovation. |
353 | gec | Hence, as the cost is now lower, manufacturers are more willing to produce and come up with more features to be added to the mobile phone to attract consumers to purchase it. | The cost of producing a mobile phone has now been lowered, and manufacturers are now more willing than ever to produce, and come with more and more features. | The cost of producing a mobile phone has now been lowered, and manufacturers are now more willing than ever to produce, and come with more and more features. | Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, as the cost is now lower, manufacturers are then more willing to produce and come up with more features to be added to the mobile phone to attract consumers to purchase it. |
354 | gec | This thus leads to the vast production of 3 G phones, bringing technology to the next level. | # This thus leads to the massive production of three-g mobile phones, which brings technology to next-level. | In this way, technology has led to the production of a 3-G phone, bringing the technology to next-level levels. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: This thus lead to the vast production of 3 G phones, bringing technology to the next level. |
355 | gec | In conclusion, the transformation of mobile phones from a black-grey screen to one that is so highly sophisticated is indeed remarkable. | The transformation of a mobile phone into a highly sophiscticated screen is indeed a remarkable thing. | The transformation of a mobile phone into a highly sophiscticated screen is indeed a remarkable thing. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In conclusion, the transformation of mobile phones from a black-grey screen to one that is so highly sophiscated is indeed something remarkable. |
356 | gec | The technological advancement of a country also affects the development of electric vehicle. | The technological advancement of the country also has an impact on its development of electric vehicles. | The technological advancement of the country also has an impact on its development of electric vehicles. | Improve the grammaticality: Technological advancement of a country also affects the development of the electric vehicle. |
357 | gec | It is only natural that nobody would want an electric car that needs recharging for every few miles it travels. | The only natural thing that nobody wants is an electric vehicle that needs to be recharged for every couple of miles it travels. | The only natural thing that nobody will want is an electric vehicle that needs to be recharged every several miles it travels. | Fix grammar in the sentence: It is only natural that nobody would want an electric car that needs recharging for every few miles it travel. |
358 | gec | Therefore the, society also plays an important role in technological innovation. | # Therefore, the society is also a very important role in the technological innovation process. | # Therefore, the society is also a very important role in the technological innovation process. | Grammar improvements: Therefore the society also plays an important role on technological innovation. |
359 | gec | As a big country with a huge amount of population, implementing a new aspect will not be done easily. | # As a large country with a large amount of people, implementing new aspects will not necessarily be done in a easy way. | # As a large country with a huge number of people, the implementation of a new policy will not necessarily be done easy. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: As a big country with huge amount of population, implementing a new aspect will not be done easily. |
360 | gec | Since they only have one way to solve an obstacle, they will be fearful of problems. | The only way that they can solve the problem is by having one way of solving it. | The only way that they can solve the problem is by using one of the two ways to solve it. | Remove grammar mistakes: Since they only have one way to solve an obstacle, they will be fear of problems. |
361 | gec | The second problem is the limited amount of qualified human resources and funds. | The second problem, limited human resources, and funding. | The second problem, limited human resources, and funding. | Remove grammatical mistakes: The second problem is limited amount of qualified human resources and fund. |
362 | gec | Consequently, these problems also impact the stages of engineering design, such as generating solutions, product safety, and liability, and technical and economic analysis. | The consequences of these problems are also impacts on stages of the engineering design process such as the generation of solutions, products safety, liability, and technical, as well as economic analysis and liability. | The consequences of these problems are also impacts on stages of the engineering design process such as the generation of solutions, the product safety, the liability, and the technical, economic, and financial analysis. | Improve the grammar of this text: Consequently, these problems also impact the stages of engineering design, such as generate solutions, product safety and liability, technical, and economic analysis. |
363 | gec | Following the solution generation step, analyzing and selecting a design ensures that the ultimate solution best suited for implementation. | The following solution generation steps ensure that the final solution is suited to best fit best for the implementation. | The following solution generation steps ensure that the final solution is suited to best fit best for the implementation. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Following the solution generation step, analyzing and selecting a design ensures that the ultimate solution suits best for implementation. |
364 | gec | Political, social, and economic changes during this period would affect the process of innovation. | # Political, Social, Economic, and Economic changes during the period 2000-2010 would affect innovation. | # Political, Social, Economic, and Economic changes during the period 2000-2010 would affect innovation. | Fix grammar in the sentence: Political, social, economic changes during this period would affect the process of innovation. |
365 | gec | Furthermore, in 1994, since the cold war had ended, the US government decided to fully open the GPS for public use. | The Cold War had finally ended, and as the Cold War was over, the United States government decided to finally fully open GPS for the public to use. | The cold war ended, and as the Cold War had finally come to an end, the U.S. government decided to completely open the Global Positioning System (GPS) for public usage. | Fix grammar in the sentence: Furthermore, in 1994, as the cold war had ended, the US government then decided to fully open the GPS for public use. |
366 | gec | The turning point for GPS for civilian use happened in 1983 when a Korean civilian aircraft was shot down by the Soviet Union for territory trespassing. | In the turning point, for the GPS for the civilian use, happened at the 1st of August, 10 years ago, when the Korean Air Force shot down a civilian aircraft for territory-trespassing. | This turning point happened at the end of the year, when the Korean Air Force shot down a civilian aircraft, the Korean Airlines, for territory-touching purposes. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The turning point for GPS for civilian use happened at 1983, when a civilian Korean aircraft was shot down by the Soviet Union for territory trespassing. |
367 | gec | Soon after this, when the surveying market boomed in The 1980'ss, the demand for GPS and the money generated from it also contributed to the development of GPS for civilian use. | The sudden boom in the survey market in the late 1800s led to the demand of GPS and money generated as a result of this boom. | The sudden boom in the survey market in the late 1800s led to the demand of GPS and money generated as a result. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: Soon after this, when the surveying market boomed in 1980s, the demand for GPS and the money generated also contributes to the development of GPS for civilian use. |
368 | gec | The development of advanced technology was mainly carried out by government agencies. | # Development of Advanced Technology mainly was done by the government agencies | This development mainly happened by the government agencies, | Improve the grammar of this text: The development of advanced technology mainly was carried out by government agencies. |
369 | gec | In conclusion, political, economic, and social situations normally determine an innovation, as shown in GPS. | In conclusion, the political, economical, and societal situation usually determine an invention as shown by GPS. | In conclusion, the political, economical, and societal situation usually determine an invention as shown by GPS. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: In conclusion, political, economic, and social situation normally determine an innovation as shown in GPS. |
370 | gec | Plagiarism makes university students or even graduate researchers lazy to come up with their own ideas. | #Plagiarism makes universities or even graduate researchers lazy. | #Plagiarism makes universities or even graduate researchers lazy. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: Plagiarism makes university students or even graduated researchers lazy to come up with their own ideas. |
371 | gec | After obtaining the information for their academic use, they simply follow the original train of thought and give up thinking about a different solution on their own. | # After they have searched for the information, they just follow their original thought and simply give up on thinking about different solutions on the other's own. | # After they searched for the information on the train of thoughts, they just follow their original thought, and give it up to their own solution. | Fix grammar in the sentence: After they search out the information for their academic use, they simply follow the original train of thought and give up thinking about a different solution on their own. |
372 | gec | For example, an engineering student who is doing a design project does not have to analyze or select solutions, which is the fourth step in the engineering design process, if he chooses to plagiarize from other articles. | This example shows that an engineer who is designing a project does not need to analyze, select, or plagiarize solutions from other sources. | This example shows that an engineer who is not doing a design project, but instead is doing an engineering design project does not need to analyze and select solutions. | Fix grammar errors: For example, an engineering student who is doing a designing project do not have to analyze or select solutions, which is the fourth step in the engineering design process, if he wants to plagiarize from other articles. |
373 | gec | Therefore, it removes all the experience of encountering problems during the solution analyzing and selecting phase and all the innovative skills he can gain from the process. | The conclusion is that it cuts off all the experiences of encountering the problems during solving the solution analysis and selecting the innovation skills he could gain from a process. | The conclusion is that it cuts off all the experiences of confronting problems during solution analysis and selection, and all of the innovations he can obtain from the problem-solving process. | Fix all grammatical errors: Therefore, it cuts away all the experience of encountering problems during the solution analyzing and selecting and all the innovative skills he can gain from the process. |
374 | gec | If the university cannot afford engineering students to do further testing or create an entire product, all the efforts that have been made in the previous steps come to naught. | # If the University cannot afford to hire engineers to do the further testing and create an entirely new product, the entire effort has been made to zero in on the last step. | # If the University cannot afford to hire engineers to do the further testing and create an entirely new product, the entire effort that has been made to make the university affordable is zero. | Update to remove grammar errors: If the university cannot afford engineering students to do further testing or create an entire product, all the efforts that have been made in the previous steps become zero. |
375 | gec | Its effects can be felt in almost every corner of the world and in our daily lives. | The effects of its effects can also be felt in almost every corners of the globe and in the daily lives of people. | The effects of its effects can also be felt everywhere in the world, and in the daily lives of many people. | Fix grammaticality: Its effects can be felt at almost every corner of the world and in our daily lives. |
376 | gec | Technological innovations can range from household appliances to industrial equipment, | In terms of technological innovations, household appliances are the most commonly used. | In terms of technological innovations, the household appliances range from the kitchen appliances to the industrial machinery. | Fix grammatical errors: Technological innovations can range from household appliances to industrial equipment. |
377 | gec | The smallpox vaccine was first tested by Jenner in 1796. | The first smallpox vaccine was tested by the Jenner experiment in 2006. | The first smallpox vaccine was tested by the Jenner experiment in 2006. | Fix all grammatical errors: Smallpox vaccine was first tested by Jenner in 1796. |
378 | gec | One similarity between The smallpox vaccine and penicillin is that they are life-saving discoveries in medicine. | The one similarity between smallpox vaccine (vaccine) and penicillin (penicillin) is that both of them are lifesaving discoveries in the medical field. | The one similarity between smallpox vaccine (vaccine) and penicillin (penicillin) is that both of them are lifesaving discoveries in the field of medicine. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: One similarity of smallpox vaccine and penicillin is that they are life-saving discoveries in medicine. |
379 | gec | In the eighteen century, before Jenner discovered The smallpox vaccine, smallpox was a widespread killer disease. | The eighteenth century before the discovery of the smallpox vaccine was a period of widespread smallpox killer diseases. | The eighteenth century before the discovery of the smallpox vaccine was a period of widespread smallpox killer diseases. | Improve the grammaticality: In the eighteen century before Jenner discovered smallpox vaccine, smallpox was a widespread killer disease. |
380 | gec | After penicillin was discovered, the death rate by infection largely decreased. | The death rate from infection was greatly decreased after penicillin was found. | The death rate from infection was greatly decreased after penicillin was known to be discovered. | Fix the grammar mistakes: After penicillin was discovered, the death rate of infection was largely decreased. |
381 | gec | The smallpox vaccine was the first vaccine that people used to improve immunity to a certain disease. | The smallpox vaccine was the first vaccination that people use to improve their immunity to certain diseases. | In the case of smallpox vaccine, people used it to improve their immunity to that disease. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Smallpox vaccine is the first vaccine that people used to improve immunity to a certain disease. |
382 | gec | Similarly, penicillin was the first antibiotic people used to cure infections. | # Similar to penicillin, the first antibiotics people used were penicillin. # | The first antibiotic was penicillin, which was used by people to cure their infections. | Fix grammar errors: Similarly, penicillin is the first antibiotic people used to cure infections. |
383 | gec | Although the smallpox vaccine and penicillin have similarities, the procedure and development of these two discoveries are different. | In spite of their similarities, smallpox and penicillin are not the same. The procedure and the development of the two discoveries were different. | In spite of their similarities, smallpox and penicillin are not the same. The procedure and the development of the two discoveries have been different. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Although smallpox vaccine and penicillin have those similarities, the procedure and development of these two discoveries are different. |
384 | gec | After testing his theory, he successfully discovered the smallpox vaccine. | The theory of the smallpox vaccine was successfully tested after testing it on his theory. | The theory of the discovery of the smallpox vaccine was successfully tested by him after he successfully tested his theory on the vaccine. | Fix grammar errors: After testing his theory, he successfully discovered smallpox vaccine. |
385 | gec | Refrigerators with a better mechanism as well as working capacity are demanded by the market. | The refrigerator with a better mechanism and working capacity is a demand of the market | The refrigerator with a better mechanism and working capacity is a demand that the market is demanding. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Refrigerators with better mechanism as well as working capacity are demanded by the market. |
386 | gec | What the customers were willing to buy gave rise to the preference of companies. | The customers' willingness to buy led to the rise of the company's preference. | The customers' willingness to buy led to the rise of the company's preference. | Fix grammar errors in this sentence: What the customers are willing to buy gave rise to the preference of companies. |
387 | gec | And the driving force behind this is the purpose of saving energy and protecting limited resources on our planet. | The driving force behind this is a purpose beyond this, which is the saving of energy and the protection of limited resources. | The driving force behind this is a purpose beyond this, which is the saving of energy and the protection of limited resources. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: And the driving force beyond this is the purpose of saving energy and protecting limited resources on our planet. |
388 | gec | The next step will be gathering information. | This will be the next step in the gathering of information. | This will be the next step in the gathering of information. | Make the sentence fluent: Next step will be gathering information. |
389 | gec | After collecting useful information, multiple solutions can be generated, and this is the third phase of the design process. | The third phase of the design process is the solution generation, which is the fourth phase for designing solutions. | The third phase of the design process is the solution generation, which is the fourth phase for designing solutions. | Fix the grammar mistakes: After collecting useful information, multiple solutions can be generated and this is the third phase for design process. |
390 | gec | The final step is implementation, including testing, building, and producing the solution based on the design problem. | The final step in implementing the solution is implementation, including testing and building the solution. | The final step in implementing the solution is implementation, including testing and building the solution. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The final step is implementation including testing, building and producing the solution based on design problem. |
391 | gec | Hence the sales of the laptops increased substantially, and the companies made profits. | # Hence, sales of laptops have increased substantially, and companies make a profit. | # Hence, sales of laptops have increased substantially, and companies make a profit. | Improve the grammar of this text: Hence the sales of the laptops increased substantially and the companies make profits. |
392 | gec | The demands by not just the SAF but also other big militaries around the world also shaped how the laptop was able to adapt to be just as reliable in extreme conditions. | The demands by the not only the SAF, but also the other big military organizations around the World, also shaped the laptop's ability to adapt in extreme conditions | The demands by the not only the SAF, but also the other big military organizations around the World, also shaped the laptop's ability to be able to just be in the extremes of conditions. | Grammar improvements: The demands by not just the SAF but also other big militaries around the world also shaped at how the laptop was able to adapt to be just in the extreme conditions. |
393 | gec | Moreover, the technology that resulted from developing the Toughbook can be applied and used to some extent in the commercial world. | The technology that results from developing toughbooks could be applied to some extent in the corporate world. | The technology that results from developing toughbooks could be used and applied to some extent in the commercialization world. | Grammar improvements: Moreover, the technology that resulted from developing the toughbooks can be applied and used to some extend in the commercial world. |
394 | gec | The laptop is indeed an important technology that is shaped by economic, military factors, and consumer demands. | The laptop is certainly an important technological innovation that shapes the economy and the military factors. | In conclusion, the laptop is certainly an important technological innovation that has shaped the economy and the military factors. | Fix the grammar mistakes: The laptop is indeed an important technology that is shaped by economic and military factors, and consumer demands. |
395 | gec | Electric cars have a very obvious shortage in their technical design. | The electric cars have an obvious shortage of their design technique. | The electric cars have an obvious shortage of their design technique. | Improve the grammar of this text: Electric cars have a very obvious shortage in their technique design. |
396 | gec | Instead, a Hydrogen fuel cell was brought in to substitute the electric battery. | In contrast, hydrogen fuel cell is brought up as a substitute for the electric batteries. | In contrast, hydrogen fuel cell is brought up as a substitute for the electric batteries. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Instead, Hydrogen fuel cell was brought up to substitute the electric battery. |
397 | gec | And since the electric cars did not have engines and some other components, the car companies could no longer benefit from the maintenance of those cars. | # And since electric cars didn't have engines, some of the other complements were no longer available, so the car company could no more benefit from those cars | # And since electric cars didn't have engines, some of the other complements were no longer needed, and the cars were no more profitable to operate. | Fix the grammar mistakes: And since the electric cars did not have engines and some other complements, the car companies could no longer benefit from the maintenances of those cars. |
398 | gec | As for the oil companies, apparently, they could not make money from oil if all the engine-driven cars were substituted by electric cars. | The oil companies apparently, did not have enough money to make money off of oil, when all the engines were substituted with electric cars, | The oil companies apparently, did not have the money to make money off of oil, because all the engines were substituted with electric cars | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As for the oil companies, apparently, they could not make money from oil, if all the engine cars were substituted by electric cars. |
399 | gec | Furthermore, other social factors contributed to the non-adoption of electric cars. | The other social factor that contributes to the lack of adoption of electric vehicles is the other factors. | In addition, other factors, such as social and economic factors, contribute to non-acceptance of electric vehicles. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Furthermore, other social factors contribute to the non-adoption of electric cars. |
400 | gec | During the Cold War period, world politics was divided between democracy and communism. | # During the cold war period, world politics divided into two camps: democracy and Communism. | The world politics during the cold war period was divided into two parts: democracy and Communism. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: During the Cold War period, the world politics was divided between democracy and communism. |
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