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Yip, and use a reference.
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Scientific evidence has proven that kindness reduces stress, improves sense of well-being and reduces depression.
[https://healthynreal.blogspot.com/2020/04/reduce-stress-by-acts-of-kindness.html](https://healthynreal.blogspot.com/2020/04/reduce-stress-by-acts-of-kindness.html)
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You might want to use a reference..
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woah! nice!!! If anything, double check the spacing in the shoulder area that's the only thing that looks a bit off
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Yea I agree with the rest of the comments, using a reference isn’t cheating
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I’d definitely try using a reference. I hate the idea that using one is “cheating” that ideology is bullshit
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thanks! Also I agree one of the things I find hardest is a colour palette because I love all colours equally lol which is something I think I can use to my advantage but you completely right with the trying different values and hues, even the shading I noticed is kinda the same value as the base colour. I’ll take this into consideration with my next pieces !
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I really like the subject matter a lot! It’s really cool and “essential” (sorry if that sounds pretentious lol) also I really like how the paint is thinly applied, I been seeing other artist thinly applying oil plant in splotches with minimal blending and I really like hat style! The face is a little too red though but you have really good facial proportions, I think it would look better if you put more detail in the hair but I would say all around it’s a solid piece
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Thanks, that's some really solid feedback and not pretentious at all! I see what you're saying about the face being too red but I decided to keep it like that because I felt that it added to the emotion/intensity of it. I've actually just started out so to hear that the style that I used is noticeable and becoming somewhat popular with other artists is also really cool.
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Awesome, thanks!
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Nice
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thank you! I'll definitely keep that in mind
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It's really cute and I love the colours! Maybe a softer nose would balance out the face just a little?
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Thanks so much! I'm planning on remaking this peace probably after I do all the other songs, because I now got a sense for this weird world that I'm making based off the album (also sorry about the late response reddit didn't give me a notification)
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awesome! I would love to see what you create!
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I'd highly reccomend learning gesture and anatomy. This would really help give your pieces some dynamism and make it come to life. Wanting to make stylized art is alright but learning the fundamentals of realism can really help when deciding to alter the real thing into something more cartoonifying
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Seems alright. However, the hair seems to be a bit too pasty compared to the semi realistic feel of the face. Same thing with the clothes, adding more wrinkles would add to the flow and realism of everything
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Hi community! Happy Monday! I just joined this group because I wanted somewhere where I could keep accountable with like minded people and share tips where I find it works. Just a bit about me, I am in my late 30s and just came out of a breakup with a truly amazing man but we didn't end up wanting the same things. I am awful at sticking to routines anyways, but my mental and physical health has taken a back seat for a long while. I am trying to get back into being emotionally OK and working on being physically healthy as well. For the time being, I am trying to take it easy on myself and not push too hard due to the heartbreak - but should I be kicking my own ass instead to get up, move more and eat more healthily? Thank you and so glad to be here. :)
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When drawing, its easy to be scared to mess it up by making a mistake on a dark line. I struggled with not adding enough depth/value with the dark tones in my drawings when I started as well. What I did to stop making my art so light that it's barely visible is draw a heavily contrasted photo. From what I think I see in the drawing, the top of the spray bottle is much more detailed compared to the rest of the bottle. I would focus more on the body of the bottle, as the edges curve at a different angle to the other edge. The drawing also lacks depth since there's no highlights, as the drawing is very light and the little shading is very light, and isn't visible so the drawing is very flat. Also, I would suggest to add more contrast between the surface and the background, as it seems that the objects are just floating.
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Hi friend! Always take care of yourself first, you can’t pour from an empty cup!
As for throwing yourself into exercise, it depends on your personality. Do you need to keep your mind busy? Maybe writing a workout plan and keeping yourself accountable is just what you need.
I would definitely recommend eating healthfully, especially if you’re coming out of a stressful/difficult time. Get that sleep in order, drink your water, move everyday :)
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It looks good! Just study a bit of anatomy! ♡
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Tips From the Health Coach - Healthy Mind - My Journey to the Fountain of Youth This video is the second in a weekly series called "Tips From the Health Coach" This second tip is on how to have a healthy mind (mindset)! How do we get our mind right in order to accomplish our goals? Do we find every reason not to accomplish our goals or do we find ways to accomplish our goals? If you have any other questions or opinions, , please leave them below!
If you are interested in a fantastic health program (weight loss and healthy body & mind) please feel free to message my wife, Robyn (the health coach) on facebook at: robyn.gault.
Chris Gault "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth: A Journey Through the Internet to Look and Feel Years Younger" The videos here depict the author's journey as he found the best intel that will help you look and feel your absolute best as you age in life. Topics include healthy eating, hydration, growing your hair back, reducing wrinkles, keeping fit and working out (exercise), healthy mind and spirit and other healthy tips found through the internet. You can purchase my book "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth," on Amazon!
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My biggest tip is to stop petting your lines lol. By that I mean the repeated pencil strokes. Draw through and remember that no drawing is precious. If you mess up, work with it and don't erase but also be confident with your strokes. The more mistakes you make, the more you learn. If you have to use crayon or mud and a stick to get this in mind, do it. Everyone keeps saying use reference. I agree but you need to learn how to use that reference. I recommend watching Proko, Sinix or Ethan Becker as they all offer very good advice on youtube.
You mentioned it is supposed to be cartoony/semi-real and that is great but no excuse for not using a ref (Not saying you always have to use a ref, but at your skill level I would recommend it until you understand anatomy a bit better) (: I guarantee 100% you will improve much faster by studying human anatomy. Keep at it, you're doing awesome (:
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I'd say try using guidelines and drawing a sketch. Trust me, you'll see improvements FAST
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not critique but wow that looks awesome
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Beautiful! You have your portions and colors down, I’d just say try to blend it a little more and color in the white spaces fully. Maybe use a little more paint? When you’re coloring just look at a reference for colors and shadows. I think you’ll get it down quickly, also instead of paper using a canvas will give you really nice results. I hope this helps sorry my English is bad :(
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Keep it light until you get it right. Then you must join the darkside.
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Because the water is yellow.
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The layering in the nose and mouth are great. Really capture the eye. I wonder about the lighter blue for the hands. It plays the the dimension a bit. Interesting effect that color has.
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Its saturation is quite a bit more intense.
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Don’t fear the darker values. Identify the shadows shapes and be sure those show through.
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There are some great books to help with this type of work. Drawing the marvel way, looms books, bridgeman and hogarth.
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Understanding color theory and how color saturation and value changes depending on the objects distance from you. Read about it and try to understand it through deeper observation in real life.
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Great work. I try some really quick drawings to get the hang of measuring and judging proportions before concerning yourself with detail.
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Consider other angles of the shoe. What is the most interesting way to present the shoe with the feeling you want to relay to the viewer?
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I'm a shoe
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Thanks for the comment. I personally prefer not blending colours or covering white spots if it's not necessary. I like the expressionistic feel it conveys. When I start blending that's usually when I stop painting because I know that's when I start being too cautious and block the energy I'm usually allowing to flow when not looking for realism.
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ever since last year i have never been able to successfully wake up on time and on my own except for a handful of moments.
over the year i have tried taking small doses of melatonin (because i was new to taking supplements like melatonin) and it helped put me to sleep, but it made it even harder for me to wake up. and eventually my parents began to look down on me for taking supplements in fear that i would become addicted
i also tried going to bed earlier, but this is a rare occasion because as a student athlete i had a very busy lifestyle and schedule.
and even during this quarantine when sleep should not be something that is limited, i sometimes find myself sleeping through online classes because i couldn’t hear my alarm. which in return enraged my parents.
please help i don’t know what to do anymore,
any suggestions and tips would be much appreciated
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Nailed it.
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this is very cute, im no expert but t think you could use a little variation in color push the shadows a bit more to add depth and cooler colors in the shadows.
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2020-05-04
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also after zooming out i notice the face isnt as simetrical as it could be namly the nose and left eye. i hope im not coming off as being harsh or anything thats not my intent just giving you things to think about
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Tips From the Health Coach - Hydration - My Journey to the Fountain of Youth This video is the third in a weekly series called "Tips From the Health Coach" This third tip is on how much water we should drink to stay at a healthy level of hydration. It also lets you know how you can tell if you are hydrated enough. If you have any other questions or opinions, please leave them below!
If you are interested in a fantastic health program (weight loss and healthy body & mind) please feel free to message my wife, Robyn (the health coach) on facebook at: robyn.gault.
Chris Gault "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth: A Journey Through the Internet to Look and Feel Years Younger" The videos here depict the author's journey as he found the best intel that will help you look and feel your absolute best as you age in life. Topics include healthy eating, hydration, growing your hair back, reducing wrinkles, keeping fit and working out (exercise), healthy mind and spirit and other healthy tips found through the internet. You can purchase my book "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth," on Amazon!
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darken the shadow would help
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2020-05-05
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I’m like 2 months late but thank you very much❤️❤️
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Meditation Music for Positive Energy - My Journey to the Fountain of Youth This video is just relaxing music and scenery to help ease anxiety. You can use this video to meditate or just plan relax and recharge the brain! If you have any comments or questions, please leave them below!
Chris Gault "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth: A Journey Through the Internet to Look and Feel Years Younger" The videos here depict the author's journey as he found the best intel that will help you look and feel your absolute best as you age in life. Topics include healthy eating, hydration, growing your hair back, reducing wrinkles, keeping fit and working out (exercise), healthy mind and spirit and other healthy tips found through the internet. You can purchase my book "My Journey to the Fountain of Youth," on Amazon.
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It looks great! What type of paper are you using? Also, try to use less water to stop pooling and it makes the colors more vibrant. Itll help it really pop out
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2020-05-09
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This is amazing! I dont know if this makes sense, but the hair seems a bit out of focus. I dont know how to fix that exactly, maybe a more distinct stop between hair and face and background?
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2020-05-09
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It looks fantastic, my only wisdom is that noses have this little shape at the bottom, where theres an inside out cashew in the middle and two usually distinct peanuts on either side. When the nostrils come to the middle, the inside out cashew makes it’s presence known and the peanuts separate from it. I dont know if that makes sense, but try feeling your own nose and the area between the nostrils and the divider and the top of the bulb and youll get what i mean. everything else is perfectamundo in my eyes, great work
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2020-05-09
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This is incredible! Maybe for the belly, think about a human torso and their ribcage and stomach and turn it horizontally. The ribcage stops and a certain point and holds some stuff up, while some skin hangs down, other stays up. If you have a dog or cat, feel its underside and rub around to feel all of the different parts of it and it will really help you get a good understanding of them. Its incredible though, do you like deer?
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2020-05-09
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I think there’s a little lack of synergy between the background and the character. That rim light is really nice and helps, but I’m talking about the lights and the darks. If you turn the picture into a black and white image with no color. You can easily see the lightest light and the darkest darkens both of those are in the background.
What I’m thinking, is that the brightest part of the character should be the same level of brightness as the brightest part of the background, and the darkest part of the character should match the same level of darkness as the darkest part of the background.
Just a thought
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Not annoyed, I am a subscriber and find it worth it for me. However, I’ll bet they could do better and get more subscribers at $4.99 per month.
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Hello! Lovely piece! So mutch personality in the wolf. Honestly I only have 2 complaints. Backgrounds can be very challenging! But when they lack the level of carein the background compared to the rest of the piece throws me off. Maybe stick to a simple color background and practice background art untill you get a bit better? Secondly the paw of the wolf seems off. Its Turing wrong in the perspective you're going for. Wonderful piece keep going! 💜
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2020-05-25
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I have nothing to say except... it’s adorable!!
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2020-05-28
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Look straight outta animal crossing. Is that Marina’s cousin?
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2020-05-28
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It's a villager concept I drew awhile ago, so that's probably why.
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That explains it. I’d love to see this villager!
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Namely
*“If you want to find the secrets of the universe, think in terms of energy, frequency and vibration”*
And
*"If you only knew the magnificence of the 3 6 and 9 then you would have a key to the universe"?*
Difficult to find source for these but skeptics more so. I know the vortex math docu was a mocked up by a teacher and some of trancriptions/letters attributed to him have not been verified.
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I had this issue on my old iPad, but I just recently upgraded to the 2020 Pro after it came out, and noticed how that doesn’t happen anymore (unless the app has been closed for a long time, of course).
I assumed this has to do with more RAM on the newer iPad and being able to save app states in memory longer, but idk if that’s actually what’s happening or not.
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I’m using news on an iPhone. It’s an XR. Maybe it’s because it’s not the latest. But it’s not that old either. Hmmm.
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I love how you've filled the entire space! I'd say a handy tool for you would be to really draw though the body and use 3d basic shapes for construction in the sketch stage. So for example for the torso start with a rectangle and draw through the rectangle so we can see its sides. this will help you get a real feel for the volume of what you're drawing.
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Thank you! The best thing I learned since I’ve been doodling on my iPad is utilize different brushes! Find interesteding textures online and download them. However you want to utilize the textures in such a way that it doesn’t look like a repetitious digital pattern. Also use that select tool. It’s a life saver.
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I’d suggest recoloring and softening the line art. It looks pretty nice though!
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make sure you sketch before you paint!
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Bright colors are fine, but I’d adjust them so that they don’t clash as much
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It's difficult to effectively critique an artwork which is using a simplified style such as this one, but there are a few things that standout. I love your line art, it's very even (could use a bit more confidence though). also could work on weight balance, for example the arms are individually as thick as the torso, which is slightly unappealing. Take some time working on real life anatomy and proportions, good luck!
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It's hard to tell because hands vary so much, this could be a perfect replica depending on your reference and it looks very well done. What I will say is that, generally, the thumb joint shading is more apparent than the thumb lines on the outside when bent and the lower portion of the thumb is larger depending on the angle, also the inside of the thumb is not a smooth line but folds of the two shapes meet. The thumb is the most forefront structure so the proportions and shading stick out the most. For the fingers, they look small but that is probably the angle, try to accentuate the palm shading a bit more to match this angle.. I see the one part on the palm you really shaded but there is also a diagonal line across the whole hand that would be slightly darker at this angle (it's light right now) I hope that makes sense. You are doing great with hands! They are always very hard, keep it up!
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This looks really cool! Your shading, understanding of fabric, lighting, and clouds shows! The main thing to work on is the anatomy as those legs are super long if you look for her hip bones. everything else is wonderful!
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Sorry, no critique as I am unfamiliar with baby anatomy and watercolor but this is just so cute. The clothes really stand out as well done! Amazing
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2020-06-29
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Good use of shadows, I think the most noticable things for this piece are the direction of the persons eyes and the shoe size. I feel the back shoe is a little large from the extra part on the heel. As for the direction of the eyes, it feels odd to have him looking off screen when there's nothing there. Disregard that suggestion if there is something and it is in like a comic panel situation. In general, my eyes drift to his very determined eyes, then to where they point. Nice job using expression in a cartoon format!
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Oh my god, thank you so much♥️!!
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The head is really nice, and the painterly and expressive application of paint is great.
An area I would pay attention to would be how the head attaches to the neck and to the shoulder. It seems like you scrunched it in a bit to fit on the paper. I have this issue often as well, and I have to go in and do compositional surgery often.
Another part to pay attention to is the blobby grey part in the bottom of the composition. It doesn’t seem to represent anything, nor does it add any ambient feel. It also looks like it can be an arm that blends into a pillow? Compared to the fluid and confident mark making of the head, it doesn’t quite compare.
Also, look at the work of Alice Neel!
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I hadn't noticed the foot before now, so thanks for pointing that out. two things I've been really working on are foreshortening and anatomy, so thank you for the advice!
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Try to get neater lines, especially on the face. Use a reference, no. Use referenceS! They will help your drawings SO much!!! Learn how to do comfortable poses that aren’t stiff, you can go on websites that will generate random poses, if they are really good they will have a timer so you can learn to draw more fluidly.
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The black circle inside the glowing circle has a very blurry outline, it doesn’t look too good but the art is nice 👌
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2020-06-30
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Why? They already have iMessage. Doesn’t make sense.
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2020-07-01
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The background looks awesome. Tho imo you shudve added a slightly darker element to the background.. maybe some deep reds and blues... And added stars of different colors just to Kinga gets some variety in there..
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2020-07-03
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Actually pretty darn great, I almost want more cohesion though, the nose looks almost oddly seperate from the face?
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2020-07-03
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His forearms and lower legs are HUGE!
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2020-07-05
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I agree with all the comments here! You shouldn't pride yourself on not using references. More professional artists will use them all the time!! <3
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2020-07-05
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oh my gosh, I LOVE this song!! If there's anything you should focus on I would think it'd be the legs. I'm not sure if you used references, but I'm absolutely sure you'd be able to make it look a bit more natural! I also think you could put more detail into the character's shadow, rather than having it just be one big blob. I really like your art style!! and great job on the shading/lighting, of course!!! <3
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2020-07-05
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Try to “draw through” with the arms. Where the sleeve is it looks like it’s crushing the arm in and it is sausage linking out a tad, try drawing the lines of where the bones should go and then draw the arm before drawing the clothing on top! It’s looking good over all though great job :)
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2020-07-06
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As spooky as it is to draw darker you should really work on your line weight! Keep at it, you’re doin good c:
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2020-07-06
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Here's a neat idea for a low power HV water vapor electrolyzer for combustion engines that says it can run off the ignition system.
[Art of producing charges for power devices US1333836](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1333836)
vapor electrolyzer with flat plate electrodes, may operate on ambient humidity or water vapor can be introduced upstream of the electrolyzer, vapor electrolyzer may be inserted before or after the carburetor
[Art of producing charges for power devices US1333837](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1333837)
vapor electrolyzer after carburetor to permit using heavier hydrocarbons like kerosene in gasoline engines by processing combined vapors of water and hydrocarbon fuel vapor
[Art of producing charges for power devices US1333838](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1333838)
vapor electrolyzer with screen electrodes
Adding oxyhydrogen to engine air intake improves engine efficiency, reduces soot and carbon monoxide pollution and increases engine life. It probably increases engine oil life too for reducing soot.
As interesting as these patents are, they're very short on details. It would be nice to have an example of how much power they use and how much they reduced fuel consumption and other details. Is this more or less efficient than electrolyzing liquid water?
All it says about power consumption is: "It might be noted that where the apparatus is installed in connection with automobiles, the wattage of the ignition system may be sufficient for the purpose where the anode and cathode electrodes are properly spaced."
How much power did ignition systems use circa 1918? The Model T (1908-1927) appears to be around 5-10 W / 25 W peak input to the induction coil with a lot of that power wasted in the vibrator-interrupter. It's harder to find the voltage, which is more relevant for this electrolyzer, but it looks like it would peak around 15-20 kV. The power consumption of this type of electrolyzer should be very low because it's basically an air capacitor with the electrolysis taking place thru the tiny leakage current thru the gaseous dielectric. It should be very efficient.
It's not part of these patents, but water vapor electrolysis like this might be applied as an additional electrolysis stage after a water electrolyzer to electrolyze residual water vapor in the gas. Or if it reacts oxyhydrogen back down to water, the gases might need to be treated separately to electrolyze the water vapor in them.
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This idea of low power high efficiency HV water vapor electrolysis might also be useful for dehumidifying building ventilation. Dehumidifying the air like this would simultaneously increase the oxygen and hydrogen content of the air. The hydrogen could harmlessly float away, but the extra oxygen would remain longer and make the air more pleasant.
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Here are other patents for water electrolysis for combustion engines.
・[Charles H Frazer electrolysis to enhance gasoline combustion 1916](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1262034)
・[Martin Boisen water electrolysis 1920-1921](https://patents.google.com/?inventor=Martin+Boisen) for combustion engine
・[Henry Blumenberg, Jr oxyhydrogen to burn heavy fuels in gasoline engines 1920](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1379077)
using oxyhydrogen to volatilize kerosene vapor to burn kerosene cleanly in a gasoline engine without engine-fouling combustion product condensation
・[Walter Drabold storage battery as electrolyzer 1929](https://patents.google.com/patent/US1876879)
・[George E Heyl storage battery as electrolyzer 1944](https://patents.google.com/patent/US2509498)
If this idea works well, there could be a number of significant consequences. Increasing combustion completeness increases engine efficiency reducing fuel consumption and also carbon monoxide pollution. Catalytic converters could become obsolete because they are only necessary for increasing combustion completeness to reduce carbon monoxide pollution. Catalytic converters could be replaced with gas scrubbers to capture CO2 and soot. And oil might not need to be processed to gasoline for gasoline engines. By reacting the fuel with oxyhydrogen, diesel and kerosene could be burned in gas engines cleaner than gas is burned now.
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2020-07-07
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Personally I feel like it could use tightening up in some places like the eyes, and hair. Doesn’t need to be super detailed as I can see you’re going for a loose expressive style, but I think the values need to be pushed further
Edit, also I may be mistaken but I kinda feel like there should be a deeper shadow on the blanket
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2020-07-08
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Hey! I think you should push your darks more. Not sure how dark a pencil you’re using, but try going to the darkest pencil possible, like 6b. Or use charcoal if it’s not dark enough. Also, it kinda looks like you copped out on janis’s jewelry. I would work with it a bit more, because the spaces between the bracelets and the backside of the bracelets gets pretty dark, so the value feels uneven in the composition. Same with the guys’ eyes (I’m sorry I’m not good with musician’s names).
Also, the form of his mouth seems a bit off. If you didn’t do this, I would construct the head and place the mouth before adding in the beard. Using a rule of thirds grid helps a lot with this
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2020-07-08
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More than half the emails they have sent me in the past month land at this on my laptop, either the error message is bad or the emails need to be proofread before being sent. The links on my phone open in a browser and then redirect to the iPhone Apple news app, so I’m guessing it’s just an issue with macOS
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2020-07-08
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I think they are just liking to stories without some kind of agreement with the site....and when the site sees the jump in traffic they do something...like change the URL or put up some pay wall, etc.
I guess Apple can afford the staff to build the emails, but they can't afford to pay for the creation of the content? Which seems contractory to their customer base's beliefs as many are content creators themselves...
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2020-07-09
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Just to keep going with this idea it might help to line map the face area first, that can help a lot with feature placement and proportions. Nice work!
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2020-07-12
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Integrate WhatsApp into iMessage ?!
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2020-07-16
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Yeah but why?
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2020-07-16
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I enjoy the subject matter, but would try to study some more anatomy! I try to force myself to do one sketch a day to help build my skills along further! Also, using a reference is your friend. It helps you understand what you are seeing vs what your brain wants to draw on the paper. When drawing from your head it is easier to make things too flat or disproportionate. All in all, really dig your concept and would just recommend practicing further!
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Comments on anatomy: [https://www.deviantart.com/naussicat/art/Dsugmd7n9hp41-Comments-849199765](https://www.deviantart.com/naussicat/art/Dsugmd7n9hp41-Comments-849199765)
How the tweaks might look: [https://www.deviantart.com/naussicat/art/Dsugmd7n9hp41-Overpaint-849199771](https://www.deviantart.com/naussicat/art/Dsugmd7n9hp41-Overpaint-849199771)
\*These are all just suggestions\*, good job with your first female bust and keep going :).
Main points by region:
The forehead (in profile) should be a rounded protrusion, instead of sloping.
The mouth area should be filled out in the muzzle region; this will help with lighting. The nasal labial folds should also be connected to the uppermost nostril and not connected at the tip of the nose. Widen the nostrils. The bridge between the eyes is also too narrow.
The ear is too far forward towards the face.
The neck needs to be shifted forward, and needs more width in profile.
The head makes a vaguely triangular shape, as opposed to an oval, and the jaw is fairly wide. These traits are not wrong, it's just more difficult to convey conventional "feminine" with this setup.
The upper eyelids should also be fatty instead of pinching into the eyebrow. The eyebrow sits on top of a mound, not a peak. Widen the space between the eyes and make them a smidge bigger.
If any of this isn't clear, please respond and I'll try to clarify.
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2020-07-19
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Hey sorry I didn't look at Reddit for a long time, thanks for your feedback!
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2020-07-19
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I'm not new to painting in krita, but I like to do that kind of thing, hmm krita instead of improving it is getting worse, [my paint](https://www.reddit.com/user/Salah-Ad-Din-Yusuf/comments/hufz6q/in_my_dreams/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x)
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2020-07-20
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I get what the shape/form is but darken the lines and shadows heavily and also try taking better photos, BUT KEEP DRAWING NEVER GIVE UP! A great man once said this about drawing "JUST DO IT!" ;)
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Woah, thank you for your critique! Its been a while since i made that sculpt. I should consider making another post so my current flaws can be fixed :D Im still struggeling with getting the eyesocket right and creating those fatpads on the upper eyelids, but i think its just a matter of practice. Now since i've got plenty of time might as well make some eye studies.
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2020-07-24
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You should! And tag me in a comment so I see it :)
My pleasure!
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Really cool. The style complements the piece. The rugged shading looks like an old illustration and fits the subject. Only thing I see here is that the background is a little sparse. It doesn't look bad but filling it in with something more would complete the piece.
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Thank you!
Yeah, the background is really empty. At that point I had the fear of ruining the drawing with a shitty background
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